DRAFT 1 FOR OUR FILM AND THE CHANGES AND RESHOOTING

                                     FIRST DRAFT

                    

 

                         THE LINK TO THE 1 DRAFT 

   https://youtu.be/QSk8EvlCONc?si=f0gI6qGMfIHehcOZ

                 

   WHY THE CHANGES AND RESHOOTING IN DRAFT 1

In our first draft, the video was shorter than expected, as it was only 1 minute and 18 seconds instead of the planned 2 minutes. The storyline did not come across clearly, which made the overall production less effective. We realised that some parts of the script needed to be changed to improve the narrative. We also had to reshoot the elevator scene as it did not match our expectations. Additionally, the lighting in several scenes was poor, which affected the quality of the footage. Although we tried to adjust this during editing, it was not fully effective, so we decided improvements were needed.