DRAFT 2 OF OUR FILM AND THE CHANGES

 

                      DRAFT 2

            LINK TO DRAFT 2

https://youtu.be/R0QG7_GLP9g?si=7O-0vXihPJgvckSV

         

The video may have been copied right because of the music so in case the background music is not working i have placed the draft 2 below aswell






     WHY THE CHANGES AND RESHOOTING IN DRAFT 2

In our second draft, most of the issues from the first draft were improved. The storyline became clearer, and the overall structure of the video was better. The reshot scenes, including the elevator scene, were more effective and matched our concept.

However, we were originally aiming for a 3-minute video, but after reviewing it, we decided to shorten it to 2 minutes and 45 seconds to make the pacing more effective and avoid unnecessary length. We also made some improvements in editing, such as adding an additional clip around 30seconds to improve the flow. And we also added our logo at the start and added some voice over. Lighting in some scenes was also adjusted to make the visuals better 




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